Gauri Nanda 101A (Junior Division)

Writing Feedback

Hey! I loved the way you themed this! I love the Maze Runner too, I have all books :) I suggest you correlate more parts of the curriculum into this (though the motion already inherently discusses it) I totally got all those really cool rhetoric and comparisons you made and how much flavor it adds to the paper. One more thing, I suggest you declutter and not use wordy sentences. Might just be me, but the amount of sentences in one paragraph really made it hard for me to read properly. Nonetheless, great job!


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